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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-19 08:47 AM



Unseen Words

I live in a space of beauty,
mind watching
everything that enters,
searching for the unknown
in my own private language
littering the land
with words of real
wanting to please.

in shades of green,
my eyes
drink to taste,
to tie my thoughts
to waiting lips
releasing in kiss
to a world alive and brittle
wondering, wanting
all that I have missed...

love's blessing

the unconditional
of mother to child
the delight in eyes
that are discovering new
tiny hands held in large
teaching me
showing me how to trust
after all

if ever I had it
to do again
I would selfishly
want more
give more
love more
and open up
to receiving more...


I have been nothing more
than unseen feelings,
having paused in time
staging my emotions
but whose act has now
come to a close.


and I thank you all...


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-03-19 09:25 AM


Wynter,
this sounds like a goodbye......I hope not, as I truly enjoy your works. This is a wonderful poem from you....I enjoyed reading it this morning!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-03-19 10:26 AM


Nakd,
Good thoughts, good words, good poem. *L*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-03-20 09:48 AM


Sunnyone, am contemplating it...just have lost some of my feelings at the moment...wondering if poetry helps or hinders me..but I thank you for your nice thoughts...*s


SY...what can I say..just when I don't expect to see you, there you are...thank you, your comments make me feel my words have some worth...huggzz for that

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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