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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-03-18 10:01 PM


How can man bear to cut these trees,
towering here for centuries,
in coastal forests, bathed in fog,
reduce them to a giant log?
Before the white man came to dwell,
no threat of their destruction fell
upon these trees of majesty.
One wonders how they came to be.
Conditions in this narrow zone,
exactly right for them alone
to sink their roots deep in the earth,
attaining such a height and girth,
make all these forests so unique!
They are a wonder that we seek
because they are an ancient tie
to our beginnings. If they die,
we've lost more than we can afford.
An insult to our Sovereign Lord!
This gift He gave to you and me,
a source of awe and mystery,
we must protect and save for new
generations to come and view.
To walk around the buttressed base,
then tip your head to stare at space
where branches mingle, high above,
creates emotions of "tree love!"

Betty Lou Hebert

© Copyright 2001 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-03-18 10:04 PM


Your poems only get better and better. This is wonderful. Joyce
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2 posted 2001-03-18 10:30 PM


I agree! You really have a talent!
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3 posted 2001-03-18 10:45 PM


Dear Joyce: What a nice comment to make! I only hope you're right! Thanks!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-03-18 10:46 PM


Thank you Elizabeth. I'm so glad you think so.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-03-19 01:53 PM


I agree with you Trillium. Your words say with good reason trees are a blessing to man.
Trillium
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6 posted 2001-03-19 02:13 PM


thecraig: Thanks much for commenting!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2001-03-20 10:49 PM


How true! Trees are very much a part of our circle of life. Protection they need.


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8 posted 2001-03-20 11:07 PM


I know this personally, I lived near these majestic beauties for a long time.......while I believe that trees are America's renewable resorce........I don't think the giant Redwoods should be cut down.....this is a wonderful poem SEA
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9 posted 2001-03-21 11:44 PM


Trillium~
I KNEW I'd like this ...

'they are an ancient tie
to our beginnings'


Just wonderfully done.
Thank you for sharing these thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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