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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-03-18 02:14 PM


Above the wind-tossed forest,
Upon a craggy peak,
Just the moon for company,
There lies the peace I seek.
Where people seldom wander
And silence reigns supreme,
Except for distant thunder
And soaring eagle's scream.
Sitting there in solitude,
I watch the moonlight wane,
Healing fissures in my soul,
Till I come back again.
These solitary places
Have special therapy,
Rejuvenating spirits,
With nature's majesty!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-03-18 02:19 PM


Your poetry is fast becoming a favorite of mine!

Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you
Betray him first, and the game's reversed...
-from The Scarlet Pimpernel


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2 posted 2001-03-18 02:20 PM


Just the moon for company,
There lies the peace I seek.
Where people seldom wander
And silence reigns supreme,
Except for distant thunder
And soaring eagle's scream.
Sitting there in solitude,
I watch the moonlight wane,
Healing fissures in my soul,
Till I come back again.
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wonderful imagery and cadence Trillium
very well done and written with a inspiring message of the gifts for the soul found in nature.
lovely work.
take care
jm

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

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3 posted 2001-03-18 04:09 PM


Truly lovely Betty. These solitary places are becoming more scarce all of the time. Love, Joyce
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4 posted 2001-03-18 05:56 PM


Elizabeth: I'm flattered to hear that you like my poetry. Yours is always fantastic!
Thank you.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-03-18 05:57 PM


Janet Marie: I greatly appreciate all your comments. Thanks!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2001-03-18 05:58 PM


Thank you Joyce. You're right about the solitary places being threatened. At least the ones close enough to be attainable.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2001-03-19 12:10 PM


How well you write of the therapy offered... and how often I've drunk from nature's prescription. *S* Well done!
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8 posted 2001-03-19 02:15 PM


suthern: I'm glad you liked the poem and thanks for your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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