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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
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0 posted 2001-03-18 04:55 AM



Thrashing wind so swift & strong,
there's a message,
I know I am not wrong;
You blow a tune,
gust a story,
string a poem
unravel a song;

Phase all worry
twisted & curled,
smooth all lines
drifting unfurled;

Unleashing in nature
the breath of the earth,
rising in power
from first moment in birth;

Floating in wisps
whirling in ways,
mashing through mists
passing all days;

At this worlds core
your reason is planned,
mingling vents
to give you commands;

Where you shall brush
& when you shall hush;

So now with your pushing
use force , be cushion
& when high you soar
reach further explore. http://www.angelfire.com/ab2/eyeview/Wind.wma

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helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
Posts 240

1 posted 2001-03-18 05:04 AM


what a fabulous presentation Craig
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2 posted 2001-03-19 02:42 PM


thecraig: This even has the feel of the wind in it! We are having a windy day here and it fits right in.

Betty Lou Hebert

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