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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-03-18 03:57 AM



You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamweaver, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-03-18 07:22 AM


Koko this is beautiful and enticing...James
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2 posted 2001-03-18 08:45 AM


Oh what a beautiful presentation Cheri! I loved the last two lines, fantastic job on this one.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-03-18 09:10 AM


Koko....oh my goodness....this is a treasure....

and a keeper!

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4 posted 2001-03-18 11:12 AM


KoKo~
What a lovely, lovely sonnet.

'A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.'


Oh, my !
What truth lays gently in that instant of time.
Beautiful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-03-18 11:19 AM



Beautiful! Wonderful midi and presentation! Into the library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-03-18 02:10 PM


A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brilliant sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know.
================

KoKo this is such wonderful writing....
a lovely poem of anticipation and wonderment found in new love and the inspiration it brings...
and your added treat of the song made it a perfect display.
very well done poetess

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

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7 posted 2001-03-18 02:21 PM


Hauntingly beautiful! Good job.

Betty Lou Hebert

Mabel A. Dilley
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8 posted 2001-03-18 03:10 PM


Seductive, enticing words layed before us: can spring be far behind? Beauty within your words as usual.

"I am not now that which I have been."

ethome
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9 posted 2001-03-18 03:12 PM


Wow! this is very beautiful...and the rest have said it all...well done!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
10 posted 2001-03-18 08:52 PM


Wow, I am humbly blessed by all of your responses. I get in here and cannot remember all the names( I am not functioning too well)
so I will just say thank you to all of you who have truly made me smile today and blessed me beyond what you ever can even imagine. Writing has been very difficult for me at this particular time. Thanks for encouraging me.
God bless you all!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 03-18-2001).]

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