St Patrick's Day Limericks revised

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Open Poetry #12

St Patrick's Day Limericks revised

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2001-03-17 02:40 AM

I think I may finally have this anapestic metre licked, just in time for St Pat's day for you. I tried to change it at the workshop but it's been too long since the original, so you lucky people will be inflicted.

March seventeen soon comes our way
to celebrate our St Patrick's Day
in hotels and pubs
and rubbitty dubs
the bold Irish have something to say

In Ireland religion is strongest
Who can say who is right, who is wrongest
in orange or green
they vie to be seen
but wind up by sparring through songfest

Green Erin's Isle a place of full mist
a bright land where the Blarney is kissed
and all men have seen
the Leprecauns' dream
yet decisions are made by the fist

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-03-17 04:54 AM

Kethry~
That's WONDERFUL !
Happy St. Patty's Day to you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-03-17 04:56 AM

This is wonderful Kethry...great job dear picnic pal!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-03-17 09:45 AM

Kethry,
and a happy ST Patti's day to you, Nice write enjoyed he read.

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