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Open Poetry #12

I've Gone Moon Crazy

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-17 02:16 AM

Some say the moon's an angel
on wings of tattered clouds.
Some say she's just a speck of dust
within a blackened shroud.

Some say the moon's a jewel
for lovers in the night.
Some say she's just a cursed wench,
A lunatic's delight.

To some she is a beacon
that helps them find their love.
To some she's just a spying glass
for aliens from above.

And some think of her as a friend
who warms their lonely souls.
And others on a cold dank night
blame her for all their woes.

But while I watch her closely
as she sails across the sky,
the moon's the glow I long to see
within your loving eyes.

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-03-17 02:18 AM

This is beautiful

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-03-17 02:55 AM

Oh boy
PackRat Mike
You hung the moon
on new-imaged height
Took hold of my heart
and spun it - just right
around the moon in
circled rhyming
~delight~

*I adored your verse !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

3 posted 2001-03-17 03:05 AM

Paula and Marge.......thank you both so much.

Mike

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-03-20 08:55 AM

Mike, this IS a beauty! I see the moon as all these things, but your summation defined the longing I feel perfectly.

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

5 posted 2001-03-20 10:53 AM

Beautiful...you make me see the moon in different ways now! ...I guess the moon means different things to different people depending on the person and situation...nicely described.

Jellybean King

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-03-20 11:10 AM

Beautiful, yes, beautiful. Yet, in reality the moon does not shine but reflects. In my thinking, for you it reflects brilliant, exciting light that illumines a wonderful love. Enjoyed your poem!

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