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Auguste
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Stirring Embers

by Michael Auguste

Embers stirring, turning, burning
pushing back the winter's chill.
Cozy, cuddled, passions yearning,
lovers find they've little will.


Breath on hair and moist partaking,
painted in fire's amber light.
Hours spent, no want of waking,
this could be unending night.



Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"
© Copyright 2001 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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Auguste, you are on a roll tonight....and your embers are sparking!
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Michael--This is romantic, tender, and softly sensual...very lovely!
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MichaelA~
Stirs my embers !
~*Marge*~


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Sunshine,

Thanks for the "sparking" and I'm glad you liked this.


Martie,

You're comments are always so sweet. Thank you.


Marge,

(laughing) You cracked my up with your comments. I'm glad your embers are in good shape, my friend, and that you enjoyed this little poem.


Thanks all,

Michael


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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"
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absolutely beautiful.....WOW Michael...




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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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Greeneyes,

Hi and thanks for the "Wow." I'm so glad you liked this. :-) Peace and good wishes.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"
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Breath on hair and moist partaking,
painted in fire's amber light.
Hours spent, no want of waking,
this could be unending night.
===============

what a lovely passionate verse that is...
wonderful writing ... superb cadence.
enjoyed this jewel

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

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Janet Marie,

Thank you for the kind words. I'm vey glad you enjoyed this one.


Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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This was so very beautifual and so very romantic Michael....what a lovely read by the warmth of the fire's glow! Thanks so much....Sue

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