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SEA
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0 posted 2001-03-16 09:39 AM


Stimulating heat
Proves to be just what she needs
Ready to show off her new colors
Intimidating Winter to the point of retreat
Not shy about the entrance so
Grand, that she is making

Insisting that you come out to play
She entices so easily

Compelling beauty
Offers you no hope of escape
Magic is in the air, with an
Impish wink of her eye, this
Nymph, so ready with love
Gloriously enters……………..
~SEA~


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1 posted 2001-03-16 09:51 AM


a delightful read....nymphs abounding!
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2 posted 2001-03-16 10:25 AM


This is a very nice read. Spring enters differently in the northwest. She comes in weeping. But when she really arrives, she is glorious. Joyce
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3 posted 2001-03-16 12:32 PM


Amazing, SEA, amazing how easily the words and lines flow in this one, even when it would seem hard because of being forced to start with certain letters...you make it seem like it was supposed to be, effortless.
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4 posted 2001-03-16 12:39 PM


A new favorite...thanks.
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5 posted 2001-03-16 12:47 PM


Lovely read, beautiful, vivid scenes.

Not wanting to sound cynical but just as she lulls you into stepping foot out into her awesome beauty, she sends a shiver of wind and or rain...you know to green up the land, sublime in motive, but chilling in the short term result.

Oh, okay, I'm cold today, trying to conserve energy as the rates go up and up an up to get us to conserve energy. Maybe I'd better step out into spring to see if I can warm up. The sun is shining brilliantly, as happy as a lark.

Pardon, my grinch is showing.

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6 posted 2001-03-16 12:53 PM


Wonderful images of spring, enjoyed the read thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

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7 posted 2001-03-16 06:19 PM


This is a lovely picture of spring, but unfortunately, not what I see out my window.
I wish it were!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-03-16 08:20 PM


SEA~
Delightfully springy !
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2001-03-16 10:22 PM


Great job, SEA!! Beautifully done!!
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10 posted 2001-03-17 12:04 PM


Really just as your name.............


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