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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-03-16 09:20 AM



After All ...sijo (a remake of if I failed)


If I failed to give to you, words of speak, nor dawning's touch
Would you then haunt every thought, knowingly, etched on my mind?
After all, you see through my silence, the wanting needs, pressing me.

Sensitive, in mornings wait, shadowing expectations
Like flowers wilting inside, thirsting for, receiving none
Treasured words, seedlings from your garden, to leaf me, bloom in feel.

Years have passed, many masks worn, many shed, in expose'
Behind sighs, memory held, silent words, red rose in hand
After all, as in nature's cycles, you too return, new in form.


~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-16 09:42 AM


this is very touching....
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2 posted 2001-03-16 09:43 AM


this is so beautiful.....I like this very much SEA
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-03-19 09:04 AM


Sunshine and Sea two of natures beauties

thank you both, again

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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