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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Someone-take me out of here someone-give me key's escape I beg of you, as you leave, leave the watch of gate, agape.... let me nudge the latch with nose, the manner that I have, suppose, ever I, to leave my yard-- who knew that it would be this hard? Leaving languid love's repose and every argument's oppose to think I traded a trump card-- who knew, that it would be this hard? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen, Who knew indeed. Well written piece, I love the way the images flowed. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Serene One, This is excellent as always... Great to read you after a long while... Regards, Sudhir |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I didn't know it would.  Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
who knew that it would be this hard? ....sigh...double sigh...oh if only I didn't understand this so well...nice work lady... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SUDHIR!!!!!!  how the hell are ya? I HAVE MISSED YOU AND WAS JUST ABOUT TO HIRE A PRIVATE DETECTIVE TO FIND YOU!!!! HUGS AND SMOOCHES! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is tugging at me S. BigTime. I love your style.  . *Peace you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no one really knows. . . but. . . sometimes you have to do it. . . you know that this one spoke to me my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ever I, to leave my yard-- who knew that it would be this hard? Leaving languid love's repose and every argument's oppose to think I traded a trump card-- who knew, that it would be this hard? ================ why ask why me twin ... cadence kissed truths baby... hugs  meWe wish ourselves beautiful, |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i did, and i do, and i will, been there done that... bernie.. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I'll echo those thoughts, Serenity! More than echo them! I'll shout them from the rooftops with you! Very very nice write. I could so relate. "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Who knew? So many feelings in that simple question. Love the poem! S |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Back to thank everyone (sorry was just SO glad to see sudhir again I got a bit carried away--no white coats THIS TIME, tho...  ) thanks all...love ya much! |
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