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candace
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 14
los angeles, california

0 posted 2001-03-16 01:28 AM



Waiting for a moment
A moment so unshared
I gazed into his eyes
I see beauty unbound

The warmth of his smile
I am drawn deeply in
softness of his touch
seducing my sin

A forbidden journey alone
Evolving into the unknowing
Inflicted with confusion
Of mine, of his, of ours

I glanced at him
A petal of passion intertwined
Capturing a moment, but only
a moment in time


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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-03-16 02:25 AM


WELCOME to Passions Candace...this is very well done! I could imagine you reading all those things into the romantic interlude......I like this very much....

"I glanced at him
A petal of passion intertwined
Capturing a moment, but only
a moment in time"

Maybe you should have told him what you were thinking...wouldn't that be a hoot!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Just A Woman
Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507

2 posted 2001-03-16 07:54 AM


Welcome! Loved that line "seducing my sin". Excellent!

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2001-03-16 10:22 AM


Welecome to Passions. I enjoyed this piece. Very soft and romantic....
Chelsea~
Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-03-16 10:27 AM


candance,

very lovely and so
romantic welcome
to passions, it's a
great place

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