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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

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0 posted 2001-03-15 11:43 PM

Whispered breath of muse's song,
Madrigals of passion's long,
Fall on the ear in satin voice,
Terpsichore, in love's rejoice,
Soothing hymns, upon my soul,
As Venus sings, mine heart extol,
Forevermore, Fair Rose, I long,
Whispered breath, of muse's song.
Soft caress of longing finger,
Feathered touch of passion's linger.
Drawing nigh, sweet angel's grace,
On weathered skin, doth beauty trace.
With gentle hand, Rose draws me near,
Her healing balm, strokes down my fear,
On heaven's winds, Eros doth bring her,
Soft caress of longing finger.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-03-15 11:45 PM

I find this poem pleasing and sweet. Joyce

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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2 posted 2001-03-15 11:51 PM

Lovely!

Mike
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3 posted 2001-03-16 09:28 PM

Thanks for reading...

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2001-03-17 11:33 PM

Again, enchantment. Your images here are soft, ethereal, captivating. Keep doing this, please. (o:

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Meadowmuse
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5 posted 2001-03-19 08:45 PM

Just wanted to read this again. (o:

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-03-19 08:51 PM

(sigh) Such a sweet and beautiful poem filled with such heavenly visions! I love this love poem so very much! You write love so very well! (sigh) I especially love Venus singing and Eros! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-03-19 09:14 PM

Ah Michael, who oh who receives such words from you....the ladies, they swoon with jealousy...as they would have you write such gems just for them....

Alwye

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In the space between moments

8 posted 2001-03-19 10:26 PM

Mike, I am absolutely in love with this.....gorgeous words. Could I perhaps use it in my collection for our upcoming newsletter? I await a reply!

Thanks for the wonderful read!

*Krista Knutson*

"Can't run fast enough
Can't hide I can't fly
I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

9 posted 2001-03-19 11:24 PM

Thank you all so much for the very gracious replies... you are all very kind...
you have brought a smile to a Kansas farm boy tonight...

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