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Open Poetry #12

What a way to lose

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-15 06:23 PM

It seems,
so far away when first met.
We loved,
with such passion.
No one else can reciprocate.
So intense,
was our love.
Nothing matter,
just us.
In the solitude of love,
we played with each others touch.
Kissing, laughing,
time went by.
What got into us?
Why did we stopped loving?
Inexplicable,
is to love,
then not to love at all.
Does love fade along with youth?
And if so,
what a way to lose!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-03-15 06:29 PM

Well, ok...I smiled. But I didn't want to! Well done, again.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-03-15 06:34 PM

Well, I know it changes, and that certainly makes me very, very sad.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2001-03-15 06:57 PM

Oh yes, so greatly said, for i fit into that catagory... Great write..

Bernie

Bernie Slicker

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