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Jellybean King
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0 posted 2001-03-15 03:08 PM


Kittens dew laundry in pink moonlight
Wash calico mittens and paws
Delightful delectables, delicious, divine
Lint balls cling to their claws

The Blue Raccoon, a rascal thief
Brings cat nip gifts, lollipop toys
A red balloon, a bell that rings, "ships, ships ahoy!"
Filled to the brim of a black velvet sack
Slung down his shoulder and over his back

"Darling, darling kittens", he woos
"Your mother sleeps fast, deep in the woods
Sent me to fetch you, without a delay
No time to wonder, there's no time to play
So come to the land of honey and milk
drink out of bowls made of silk"

Into the sack they tripped and fell
Over their mittens and under their tails
The Blue Raccoon just chuckled and hummed
His heart beat faster, his heart did drum
"Come to the land of honey and milk
drink out of bowls made of silk
Lullaby, lullaby, loodledeedumm"

His belly ripe, so round and plump
A better meal could not have done
Licking fingers sucking his thumbs
Kittens taste like peppermint plumb
Mittens make such furry wreaths
But lint balls stick to teeth
Lint balls stick to teeth
"Lullaby, lullaby, loodledeedumm"



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1 posted 2001-03-15 03:22 PM


?????? Don't you like cats? this was a really fun read...like a nursery rhyme SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-15 03:27 PM


Yee gads... how much did Long John (our resident kitty kicker) pay you for this poem? LOL. Gee... and I was just about to go to lunch... thanks for the diet! LOL

Seriously... great rendition of a cruel, cruel tale. *G* (Can you tell I love cats? LOL)

Jellybean King
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3 posted 2001-03-15 03:37 PM


"I LOVE just LOVE CATS...especially KITTENS (hehehe)!", said the Blue Raccoon.

Moral of the story: Kittens beware of blue raccoons bearing gifts in the pink moonlight

[This message has been edited by Jellybean King (edited 03-15-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-03-15 04:39 PM


JellyBeanKing~
Just delightfully done !
A smile at play !
~*Marge*~



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5 posted 2001-03-15 05:42 PM


I love your tales - you bet I do! These bring out the kid in all of us, and I simply adore your stories but you knew that did't you? Great job on this one and I shall add it to my library for Tori.

~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~

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