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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Messages Your message, you sent out into the sea, Clearly statements, that we were not meant to be. Out in the open, words penned you place, The thoughts and feelings I refused to face. Listening to shells picked up on the beach, Stop, hear the echoes, you only need reach. Words sent to sea all bottled up tight, One day to be opened, to let in some light. Messages searching for someone out there, Found, Hearing and listening....see, Someone really does care.  Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a message.... thanks for this! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Sunshine, thank you very much.. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is lovely, bernie! A thoughtful walk on the beach. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Serenity, Thank you, I can alway count on you making me smile some. I trying to get better at it....lol.. BernieBernie Slicker |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Such a nice message. Thanks, wonderfully done! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I put a shell to my ear and got an ear full of sand!  Liked your poem sir. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I like this one Bernie...love the images it brings to mind...standing on the beach and tossing a bottle inot the waves... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
"out in the open, words penned you place the thoughts and feelings I refuse to face" I love these lines. They say so much. So often.......so very often........ I applaud, bslicker! After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Walker: thank you glad you liked it. Poet deVine: That can happen to, 0======0 so here is a q-tip, but never put anything in your ear unless it is bigger than you elbow. Paula: thank you, could send alot of bottles lately. Just A Women: Very glad you liked it, and yes very often probably to often. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice...funny how when you are open to life's quirks, someone just appears...like a bottle on the beach.....great metaphor...love this |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just wanted to add? that if ya get something in a cuervo bottle? that would be from ME!  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
And thank you, the worm was great... Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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