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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-03-15 12:04 PM



NOTE! THIS POEM IS CURRENTLY UNDER CONSTRUCTION BY THE AUTHOR. I was posting, my computer freaked out on me and I thought I was going to be disconnected so I went ahead and submitted before I lost it. I've lost too many good ones that way! LOL! Read if ya like or just wait for it to be finished! Thanks and have a wonderful day!

I wanted to thank you,
As I rise from sleep having dreamed out some of yesterday's angsts.
As I open the curtains and view that the rain has ceased for now,
And the sun shines anew like my smile.
May I say that in you I found my love for beautiful and hopeful things again.
The dawning of a realization that I can come forward from the chasm with your help,
Will be my comfort and grin for the day.
Thank you for the silence you gave when I had nothing to say,
And you weren't trying to force me to talk.
Thank you for the comfort in the feeling,
That I was holding your hand over the line,
Curled up watching the weather that had me scared to death.


[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 03-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-03-15 12:05 PM


What a nice thank you.
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2 posted 2001-03-15 03:15 PM


This is lovely, Temptress... What a wonderful friend... what a great way of saying thanks! *S*

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this is truly heartfelt.....made me smile... very nice thank you indeed! SEA


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4 posted 2001-03-16 01:10 PM


well, I think that it stands quite nicely like this. . . but if there's more. . . I can't wait to see it!!

Excellent. . .

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5 posted 2001-03-22 05:25 PM


Well, I think this must be finished as I didn't feel the urgency enough to go back to it! LOL! I never did thank anyone for their replies though, so I'm doing it now. Thanks everyone!
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