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Chaos Delight
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Chaos Delight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chaos Delight Struck by chaos of delight In the warmth of lovely bright A figure standing in the sun Tending flowers one by one. Moving in the colored flair Perfumed flowers in the air Hues of gold in greenery Took the very breath from me. A basket full of natures joy Next to a dress of paduasoy Floated in a breeze at play And filled my mind with émigré. I took her arm in fantasy A mental sort of ecstasy Walked with her the gardens lush And pointed out the singing thrush. She did not feel or heed my grace Beside me, or in mental pace She went about her garden chores Oblivious my mental pause. And sadly I drifted away Another dreams chaotic stray. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ... are showing your genius again.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful..........the flow is absolutely perfect!  SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A basket full of natures joy Next to a dress of paduasoy Floated in a breeze at play And filled my mind with émigré. I took her arm in fantasy A mental sort of ecstasy Walked with her the gardens lush And pointed out the singing thrush. She did not feel or heed my grace Beside me, or in mental pace She went about her garden chores Oblivious my mental pause. And sadly I drifted away Another dreams chaotic stray. ================== ahhhh yes ... spring time ... when a young dragons mind is filled with flights of fancy  "A basket full of natures joy Next to a dress of paduasoy Floated in a breeze at play And filled my mind with émigré." and YOU keen and cool poet sir... fill our minds with "emigre" and that verse is so way cool I can only smile and shake me head in poetic respect. very cool poem Sy-babes  *WW* meSprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think this one especially delights me because I've been itching to start gardening (anything to get the baby plants off my kitchen counter *G*)... Well written, Seymour... I enjoyed very much! *S* |
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