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Mother Of The Seeds ( for White Dove's Nature's Majesty Challenge)
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Mother Of The Seeds ( for White Dove's Nature's Majesty Challenge) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Upon the rolling hillsides, beneath the drifitng breeze, in creaking scented greenwoods with whisper spoken speech, cross meadows sleek and oiled, on trails from field to sea, the soul imbibes connection to mother of the seeds. With sovereign gypsy wonder her flight path rides the wind from golden grass to rivers she brings her own to blend. With pollen threads of vision committed to extend her spreading through the offing the kindred of her femme. Her past imbued with annals of old forgotten times; her future full of promise and undiscovered rhyme and she has lived tommorrow beyond the evil crimes forever grand and flawless to greet the light divine. The falling spirit showers come washing her release to colonies of basins within her precious keep. Through hail and snow she ferries with stalwart goals to greet the soils of verdure foilage grand mother of the seeds. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Tis a keeper, for sure.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
BRAVO! I bow to the excelence of this piece Truely magnificent in every way This must me one of my favorites ever Congratulations on this exquisite poetry (Should be published) Liz |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful!  SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I agree with Liz! (applause) This was excellent! Submit this one to the main site!!!   |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ethome, Absolutely awesome, the imagery is awesome, challenge very much met, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Vibrant, verdant poesy! Loved it, the lilt of it, the 'spring renew' of it. Well done, ethome!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Karilea glad you see it that way ! Thanks Elizabeth for the encouraging words I will treasure them. Sea I'm glad you could take the time to drop in and thanks! White Dove thank you for the kind words and for the challenge....I'm definitely a nature lover! Thanks so very Much Cerenity for the awesome word I really appreciate it! Virginia I'm so happy you could take the time to read this and I love all your adjectives...thanks again! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ehtome--suberb writing!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Martie it means a lot coming from you! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Upon the rolling hillsides, beneath the drifitng breeze, in creaking scented greenwoods with whisper spoken speech, ================================= With sovereign gypsy wonder her flight path rides the wind from golden grass to rivers she brings her own to blend. With pollen threads of vision committed to extend her spreading through the offing the kindred of her femme. Her past imbued with annals of old forgotten times; her future full of promise and undiscovered rhyme ======================= The falling spirit showers come washing her release ===================== the soils of verdure foilage grand mother of the seeds. ===================== E-babes this is stunning and wnderfully done such unique and lovely imagery and poetic phrasing ... very very well done poet sir ... "With pollen threads of vision committed to extend her spreading through the offing the kindred of her femme." what a very cool verse this is... "pollen threads of vision" ... now thats brilliant poetry!!! Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What can I say that hasnt already been said? Except you know how your words touch me...Mother of the seeds...yes I have a tree just like that in my front yard...thanks for making me look...hugs |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Janet thank you so much my dear poet pet...you're always spoiling me and aw hell yes, I love it, thanks for the comments my special poet friend and remember you're VANtastic!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula you must have snuck in there on me my sweet poet pal ...thanks for the comment and give that tree a hug once in awhile.....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Have I told you lately how wonderful you are? Probably, but I'm gonna tell you again, so put up with it! YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!!! This is a fabulous piece of work---I too, just adore this! Truly inspiring ethome! |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
This was fabulous...I loved the flow and the descriptions! I can't decide which line is my favorite...oh, what the heck...they are all my favorite! I also think the title "Mother Of The Seeds" is grand. Jellybean King |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Celeste! I think you're wonderful too and I appreciate the wonderful poet friendship we enjoy! Jellybean thank you for such nice thoughts, so glad you enjoyed! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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