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Open Poetry #12

Upon Her Tree

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-03-15 02:34 AM

There she sits upon her tree
arms both folded, elbows on each knee,
chin propped up,
nails almost on the cheek,
she has seen me there
& yes I had a peak;

Sneaking a check through foliage green,
is my love sincere?
am I a fiend
Placing her eyes deep in my heart.
guessing her wishes,
planning not to part.
Such a pretty lovely fairy princess
beyond my need to grasp.

Wings there at the ready ,
& the story that eyes cast,
is if you want to be with me be very very fast.

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

1 posted 2001-03-15 04:29 AM

I love her craig...I can see you having a peep

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-03-16 09:05 AM

Hi Thecraig,

I loved the imagery you panited here, enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-03-16 03:38 PM

darling....

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

4 posted 2001-03-16 04:33 PM

...a great descriptive picture of a fairy princess. I just loved "if you want to be with me be very very fast"...this line has a real innocent mischievious ring to it!

Jellybean King

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

5 posted 2001-03-17 06:08 AM

Jellys stayed innocent with me, I thank every comment here.

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