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Comfort Zoning

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Lady In White
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0 posted 03-14-2001 07:16 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lady In White

Comfort Zoning

I know someone;
you do, as well
needing comfort,
a breathing spell

give it your all
give it quite well,
folks are worth it,
with tales to tell

comfort zoning
a place to talk,
forests, sidewalks,
places to walk

sunsets, sunrises,
mornings, and nights
give, completely,
feel with great might

comfort zoning
where you should be
living, breathing
so tranquilly

days come, days go
ins, outs, just so
mild days, then wild
seek peace in style

this child of you
where sun's rain gains
begin again
where life loves you

comfort zoning
childish desires
comfort speaking
lights all my fires

just simple thoughts
to share with you
giving insight
leaving you clues

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Lady...It seems as if you are speaking this one to me...beautifully written!
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where you should be
living, breathing
so tranquilly

days come, days go
ins, outs, just so
mild days, then wild
seek peace in style

this child of you
where sun's rain gains
begin again
where life loves you
===========================

ah...sounds wonderful ...
where does one find such peace...
(besides in poetry)
so lovely and serene Lady...
well done

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~
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3 posted 03-15-2001 12:31 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Lady in White,

This was wonderful, enjoyed very much,

Love, Cerenity


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We have to be reminded that He exist!"

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4 posted 03-15-2001 01:59 AM       View Profile for bslicker   Email bslicker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bslicker

I am in the comfort zone now..


Bernie..



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5 posted 03-15-2001 09:32 AM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White

Thank you all for joining me....
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Hi,
Enjoyed this poem very much.
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7 posted 03-15-2001 03:10 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this one a lot, Lady!

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opps reading this a again, just put me in the comfort zone....



Bernie


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you are all so nice...thank you...and to you Bernie....come join the comfort zone...anytime....
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we all need friends like you've described...beautiful words.

~~~kingsangel~~~

 
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