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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-03-14 02:47 PM



The song plays itself,
again.
You are here,
loving me.
That soothing music,
that rocks my soul.
It's lyrics,
take hold of my feelings.
Kissing,
we undress.
Knowing what comes next,
we both embrace.
The song,
plays itself again.
We laid naked,
in each other's arms.
The sweet melody,
caress our passion,
taking us to heaven.
This erotic romance,
is wrapped around,
the song's sweet tone.
We kiss,
again as the song replays.



A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-03-14 04:08 PM


Walker, you are garnering a favorite reader here....
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-03-14 04:24 PM


If the song plays again, do we get to have an encore. Loved the entertainment during the music.
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2001-03-14 11:11 PM


Wonderfully romantic thoughts and song, walker.

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223

4 posted 2001-03-15 03:10 AM


Music sure helps to unite two separate rythms. Your words are good reminders
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