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Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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Walla Walla, WA 99362

0 posted 2001-03-14 01:30 PM



I can remember so much about you
The way the sun glistened off your hair
The way you always stepped over grates
The looks we got riding down the hiway
THe sound of leather creaking
The whinny you always greeted me with
When grain was more important than me
The courage that I found with you
The shoulder that you were
The sore muscles I got from a fall
The first time we got first
The time you ran away from the cows
When you bit that guy I didn't like
When you were my soul companion
Wehn I cried on you
The many brushings you got
Your personality that matched mine
How we understood each other
But what I rememeber most
Is how you were there for me
But I wasnt there for you

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

© Copyright 2001 Cuddlez - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 2001-03-14 03:27 PM


No replies?
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
2 posted 2001-03-14 04:20 PM


I had a horse when a young girl. I wasn't allowed to leave the yard walking, but could go anywhere while on my horse. They always knew "Sugar" would bring me home. Strange I hadn't thought of her in over 30 years.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-03-14 04:24 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
4 posted 2001-03-14 04:30 PM


I remember lots of great times around horses
and it make me think of all the
pets and people that have been there for me
but i haven't had enough consideration
to think what have i done for them..
well done


~*Peachy Be*~

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2001-03-14 07:56 PM


Hey Cuddlez...this is a beautiful tribute to your great friend...very nice write!

sp


do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

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