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bslicker
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0 posted 2001-03-14 12:31 PM


The woman that has inspired me the most in my life,
Poet deVine's poetry challenge,for the Month of March, for Womens Month.
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This woman, I have known for more than half my life,
She's the backbone that has made me...me,, this is my wife.

The mother of my children, that has built our lair.
She did all this, without even a care.

The things she has given up for all of us,
Has put her on top of the list, and in the front of the bus.




Bernie Slicker


[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-14-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-03-14 01:25 PM


This is so personal...but I must say your devotion is touching! Very sweet!
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2 posted 2001-03-15 12:38 PM


Hi Bslicker,

This was so sweet, I hope you showed it to your wife, great job,


Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



bslicker
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3 posted 2001-03-15 01:46 AM


Serenity,
The poem might be personal, but i will say that Helen (1slick_lady) has be the truth of this poem for me, and has been the inspiration of my life since, 1978.

Cerenity,

She posts here, though were are apart right now, she will see it.


Thank you both serenity & Cerenity for your thoughts.

Bernie

Bernie Slicker


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4 posted 2001-03-16 09:03 AM


I like this whole thing...the message, the responses...so BTTT with you!
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