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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-03-14 09:21 AM





In time beyond forever,
I’ll have your love…
My heart will wait for you,
somewhere above…
I cannot touch you here,
within these bounds…
For us, beyond forever,
is freedom found…

The journey here is long,
the miles are great…
In time beyond forever,
for you, I’ll wait…
A promise from two hearts,
to last all time…
In time beyond forever,
you will be mine…

I pray you read beyond,
into my soul…
And know we’ll share our worlds,
as time unfolds…
In time beyond forever,
my love will be…
And there, someday,
you’ll give…
your love to me…


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




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ethome
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1 posted 2001-03-14 09:25 AM


Very romantic Sunny I love strength of the deep seated emotion!

In time beyond forever,
my love will be…
And there, someday,
you’ll give…
your love to me…

Very well done poetry!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2001-03-14 09:27 AM


Thank you ethome....
I'm glad the feelings that came to me in writing this came through in the reading also. I do enjoy your replies!

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3 posted 2001-03-14 09:45 AM


SunnyOne~
Oh how I love the thought of the time beyond forever...

This is a lovely gifting from your pen.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-03-14 09:52 AM


In time beyond forever

a beautiful thought, Sunnyone

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Sunnyone
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5 posted 2001-03-14 10:08 AM


Thank you Marge! I'm glad that you enjoyed this one, as it felt so good to write it. I have always believed that love of a true nature could live on into many lifetimes.
Someday I shall find out!!

Wynter.....
So glad to have you read it today.....
Your reply means a lot to me. Thank you!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




Allan Riverwood
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6 posted 2001-03-14 10:51 AM


I also liked that term. Too bad everyone already pointed it out.
The entire poem was quite good. Nice job.
~Allan

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7 posted 2001-03-14 06:35 PM


Beautiful love poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-03-14 08:50 PM


Me too! "Beyond Forever" What a wonderful concept. And I really like the flow of this poem, it just sings to me.
Sandra

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