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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
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0 posted 2001-03-14 02:13 AM



Cloud Dance

A look from her eyes then obey,
so intimacy may be,
a gentle moment cherished,
within eternally:

Who ever looks that way,
the way that that look was,
brings back memory,
sharing time with eyes;

Expressions of tender longing,
smother,
disallowing the wrong in,
a babies warning commandeers,
with love she also comforts & cheers;

Oh Celtic Princess with softening hands,
with needs that share all life's commands,
soul filled with butterflies,
heart melts enthused,
minds filled with electricity,
distant dreamers try to fuse;

Alive & yet already dead,
grown adults
from memories in the wound were led,
to grow closer than guardingly withdraw,
feel passion, controlled, unbridled raw,
fading to nonsense like a vanishing sore;

Painstakingly realigning,
new life,
healed wounds,
ideas clean & fresh,
ridden thoughts of lovers together to soon;

May we always dance the clouds Princess,
dust from earth & deepest space,
one to another together,
where ever they form Princess,
two solid human seeds nurturing our race

© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2001-03-14 09:45 AM


A look from the eyes of love can be the most powerful of forces one can possess. I enjoyed this work of art, and I hope to read more from you.....
"soul filled with butterflies....mind filled with electricity"
Yes......I hope to read much more!!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-14 10:21 AM


As do I. The graphic took me by surprise when I scrolled down.
The whole poem was entirely beautiful. Great job.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


thecraig
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3 posted 2001-03-14 08:35 PM


Thank you both, A nice surprize I wonder?
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