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0 posted 2001-03-13 04:54 PM



So much for today
What happens tomorrow
Don’t be unreal
The rules are clear
Wondering why you endure
Because you feel secure?
So you seem sure
You must have the cure
I must not be lured,
Sincerely, signing off,
Truly yours.


Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 2001-03-13 09:58 PM


Nice job. i enjoyed the flow of this poem.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2001-03-13 10:01 PM


Good to read your work!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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