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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-03-13 04:01 PM



I Am Woman

I am woman,
one with nature,
essence of light,
dawn of day,
I am wisdom and gentle caress,
sparkle of dreams,
song of understanding,
I am the universal breath of tenderness.
maker of star shine,
cloth of God's soul,
I am poetry of the universe,
nurturer of hearts,
pillar of strength,
sonnet of tradition,
I am skin, supple as silk,
fever of desire,
flower of sweet bloom,
I am vision of angels
kaleidoscope of wonders,
wings of fancy flight,
I am the keeper of faith,
partner of man,
mother of child,
I am beauty in purest form,
creator of the circle of life...
the secrets of heaven grow in my womb,
I am the wind of love eternal,
essence of light,
dawn of day...

I am woman,
complex, simple and timeless

~*By Melissa Honeybee*~


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~



© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-03-13 04:31 PM


Hey Melissa, I'll drink to that. a beautiful read. *L*
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-03-13 04:32 PM


Yes...you are!
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-03-13 04:33 PM


amen and amen!!!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sven
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4 posted 2001-03-14 01:13 PM


indeed you are my friend. . . and we wouldn't have it any other way. . .

excellent. . . powerful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-03-14 07:46 PM


I am vision of angels
kaleidoscope of wonders,
wings of fancy flight,
I am the keeper of faith,
partner of man,
mother of child,
I am beauty in purest form,
creator of the circle of life...
the secrets of heaven grow in my womb,
I am the wind of love eternal,
essence of light,
dawn of day...
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you are all these things and poetess of grace as well...
beautiful imagery in this lovely tribute to the spirit of women Melis...
wonderful writing and inspire!!!


Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Just A Woman
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6 posted 2001-03-14 07:59 PM


Beautiful, gentle and spoken with a quiet secureness. Really nice job with this, Melissa!

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2001-03-14 08:10 PM


/Right on, Melissa. Loved it. Joyce
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8 posted 2001-03-14 08:15 PM


Melissa~

In all the revelry~
Woman is all I ever wished to be
For as long as in me life does dwell
I will attempt to do it well !

This is just a marvelously written piece, my friend.
I like the softer/stronger side of Melissa !
The crowning touch of nature is worn in the heart of a woman.
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-03-14 08:34 PM



Thank you Sy, Karilea, Kathleen, Sven, Janet Marie, Just A Woman, Joyce and Marge!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed my tribute to the celebration of womanhood!


Chelsea~
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10 posted 2001-03-15 01:25 PM


missy,

exquisite tribute to women

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