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Dancing In The Rain
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Dancing In The Rain |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
~*~ DANCING IN THE RAIN ~*~ Dancing in the rain ~*~ Water ~ drenching my thirst... Sacred deviation from routine... The wind is whispering... There are no rules to this game... You are free to dance; You are free to feel; You are free to rediscover... Forgotten dreams Stolen by the past Faith breathed into dreams... Life that struggled to survive... And prevailed through determination That dreams are doorways to reality... Awaiting the touch of the hand that Gave them birth... And the love that conceived them... ~*~ <3 ~*~ <3 ~*~ Dancing in the rain... Laughter drowning out the sound of thunder... Emotions unleashed…free falling beneath the stars Gently kissing the earth Tender tears from Heaven falling... Quenching my thirst Embracing my fears... Revealing my secrets... Erasing the pain of yesterday And rewriting tomorrow With all the promises of today... Breathing... Feeling... Dancing... In the rain ~*~ The breath of God will keep me warm And my wings will never fail me. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
There is alot of energy and conviction in this piece, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you Regards, Olias. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful feel to this. So happy you have wings! |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
Oh...this has such a feeling of celebration, renewal and hope...a renewal of the spirit, as the rain renews the Earth. Words so beautifully embroidered into the tapestry of the human soul! Jellybean King |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
One of my favorite pastimes! I could feel the exhilaration through your words. (The eye of a hurricane is quite a thrill too.) Thanks for the smiles. |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Thank you all so much for your kind and gracious support. I just know I'm going to love it here ~ blessings and smiles to you, and thanks again! Martha |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Had to leave your poem half way though to retrieve from the cloths line. I love the rain, here I sit poem complete carpet wet, & me drizzeled on . Your poem was a joy . thank you. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
"A joy" sounds like an accurate summary of this piece. I thought it was very nice.  As is the rain.~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are free to dance; You are free to feel; You are free to rediscover... Forgotten dreams Stolen by the past Faith breathed into dreams... Life that struggled to survive... And prevailed through determination That dreams are doorways to reality... Awaiting the touch of the hand that Gave them birth... And the love that conceived them... Well written poetry! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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