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I Will Come Home To You
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I Will Come Home To You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Will Come Home To You ~*Marge Tindal*~ O' Maker Of Life into this earthly shell I am bound until I am washed upon your shore awaiting passage forevermore at peace among the oceans of my people Having floated many moon-moved waves I now await the tide that will bring me into the serenity of your gentle waters Whenever you are ready I will come home to you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-13-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There's no place like home.  HUGS. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts Marge...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I see you are a girl who also knows where her journey takes her. This was a wonderful, spiritually uplifting piece of poetry, and with that said, night night! ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
What a beautiful image this creates.......so peaceful and tender. I loved it. A wonderful poem to read in the early morn. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The warmth of home's hearth is truly enticing... Here's hoping you venture about this mortal plain for a long time to come, my friend... You've much to write... lots lots more....  |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
"I now await the tide that will bring me into the serenity of your gentle waters" ~ Oh Marge, this is just so beautifully calming, a wonderful read to start off my day. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Yes, I'm sure we will find that to be true. JamesMichael~ Thank you for stopping in to read my gentle offerings. Mysteria~ Indeed, I am lifted on spirited wings. Thanks, my friend. JustAWoman~ My joy is in sharing. Thank you for allowing me to do so. Nan~ I was inspired by a moving piece of Native American music - The spririts lifted this one from my inkwell. You know how much I appreciate being able to share. Bonnie~ I am pleased to know that you found the serenity of the waters to bless this day. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
BEAUTIFUL MARGE.......A DELIGHT TO READ WHEN THE GREAT MANITOU WHISPERS YOUR NAME BE READY<> |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: "moon-moved waves".... damn.... that's beautiful..... the whole thing is lovely......... very.... |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Incredibly beautiful. Inspiration for tears. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, Marge, and very timely. I thank you, sincerely, for this. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I.... pick up.... the shell..... and listen...... to voices...... of my...... past..... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolutely lovely, breaktakingly lovely. A neighbor for many, many years, passed away today. All her life she was trapped in a shell that was weak, bent, and for two decades, plagued with a cancer. Now, I envision her in her new glorified body, filled with joy for all eternity. With her maker in the twinkling of an eye. This was so lovely to read...just now. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
As usual Marge, this is beautiful and also uplifting! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MySoaringEagle~ As you so well are aware - WE will be ready when the time for the great Moon Over walk comes. I love you. Doreen~ I appreciate the sincerity of your reply more than you could possibly know. Thank you, friend. Seraphin~ To know one is moved to tears is richly rewarding to a writer. Thank you. Claire~ The Spirits move us at times when we are not even aware of their purpose. I am blessed to know that this one reaches you when you feel you need it. Bless your heart. Karilea~ A lovely, caring response. Thank you. VAS~ Perhaps it was meant to lay in your heart - just when you need it. I am pleased to know that it reached you. Condolences to the family and friends of your neighbor. Trillium~ Thank you, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was an very nice piece, Marge. I loved it. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful spiritual write Marge....reminds me of the Van Morrison song 'Into The Mystic' great write as usual, always look forward to seeing your name so I can swim in that old poetic stream we all bathe in!!!!!!! Pour them in there Marge ...go for it! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ Thanks - I'm glad you liked it. ETHome~ I'll have to find that song and give it a listen. Meantime - SPLISH-SPLASH !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Whenever you are ready I will come home to you My dear friend, they will call you at some point, but for now, I am holding your hand and keeping you here. This was a soothing and calming write and I appreciated reading it. I'll be in touch ... hugs |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful!! Betty |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just a soft sigh of remember for one so dear who has gone 'home' ... yet returns to me in times of need~ My Warrior ... I miss you so~  ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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