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I Will Come Home To You

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Marge Tindal
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I Will Come Home To You
~*Marge Tindal*~


O' Maker Of Life
into this earthly shell I am bound
until I am washed upon your shore
awaiting passage
forevermore at peace
among the oceans of my people

Having floated many moon-moved waves
I now await the tide that will bring me
into the serenity of your gentle waters
Whenever you are ready
I will come home to you





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-13-2001).]
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1 posted 03-13-2001 04:34 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

There's no place like home. HUGS.
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Lovely thoughts Marge...James
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3 posted 03-13-2001 05:34 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I see you are a girl who also knows where her journey takes her. This was a wonderful, spiritually uplifting piece of poetry, and with that said, night night!

~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~
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What a beautiful image this creates.......so peaceful and tender. I loved it. A wonderful poem to read in the early morn.

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.
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The warmth of home's hearth is truly enticing... Here's hoping you venture about this mortal plain for a long time to come, my friend... You've much to write... lots lots more....
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6 posted 03-13-2001 07:36 AM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

"I now await the tide that will bring me into the serenity of your gentle waters" ~ Oh Marge, this is just so beautifully calming, a wonderful read to start off my day. Bonnie
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Serenity~
Yes, I'm sure we will find that to be true.

JamesMichael~
Thank you for stopping in to read my gentle offerings.

Mysteria~
Indeed, I am lifted on spirited wings.
Thanks, my friend.

JustAWoman~
My joy is in sharing.
Thank you for allowing me to do so.

Nan~
I was inspired by a moving piece of Native American music -
The spririts lifted this one from my inkwell.
You know how much I appreciate being able to share.

Bonnie~
I am pleased to know that you found the serenity of the waters to bless this day.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~





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BEAUTIFUL MARGE.......A DELIGHT TO READ

WHEN THE GREAT MANITOU WHISPERS YOUR NAME
BE READY<>
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quote:
Having floated many moon-moved waves
I now await the tide that will bring me
into the serenity of your gentle waters
Whenever you are ready
I will come home to you


"moon-moved waves".... damn.... that's beautiful.....

the whole thing is lovely......... very....
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10 posted 03-13-2001 09:50 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

Incredibly beautiful. Inspiration for tears.
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Beautiful, Marge, and very timely. I thank you, sincerely, for this.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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I....
pick up....
the shell.....
and listen......
to voices......
of my......
past.....
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Absolutely lovely, breaktakingly lovely. A neighbor for many, many years, passed away today. All her life she was trapped in a shell that was weak, bent, and for two decades, plagued with a cancer. Now, I envision her in her new glorified body, filled with joy for all eternity. With her maker in the twinkling of an eye. This was so lovely to read...just now.
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14 posted 03-14-2001 01:02 AM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

As usual Marge, this is beautiful and also uplifting!
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MySoaringEagle~
As you so well are aware -
WE will be ready when the time
for the great Moon Over walk comes.
I love you.

Doreen~
I appreciate the sincerity of your reply
more than you could possibly know.
Thank you, friend.

Seraphin~
To know one is moved to tears is richly rewarding to a writer.
Thank you.

Claire~
The Spirits move us at times when we are
not even aware of their purpose.
I am blessed to know that this one reaches
you when you feel you need it.
Bless your heart.

Karilea~
A lovely, caring response.
Thank you.

VAS~
Perhaps it was meant to lay in your heart -
just when you need it.
I am pleased to know that it reached you.
Condolences to the family and friends of your neighbor.

Trillium~
Thank you, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~



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This was an very nice piece, Marge. I loved it.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

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Beautiful spiritual write Marge....reminds me of the Van Morrison song 'Into The Mystic' great write as usual, always look forward to seeing your name so I can swim in that old poetic stream we all bathe in!!!!!!! Pour them in there Marge ...go for it!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.
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Allan~
Thanks - I'm glad you liked it.

ETHome~
I'll have to find that song and give it a listen.
Meantime - SPLISH-SPLASH !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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19 posted 07-31-2003 02:08 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Whenever you are ready
I will come home to you


My dear friend, they will call you at some point, but for now, I am holding your hand and keeping you here.

This was a soothing and calming write and I appreciated reading it.

I'll be in touch ... hugs
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Beautiful!!
Betty
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Just a soft sigh of remember for one so dear who has gone 'home' ... yet returns to me in times of need~
My Warrior ... I miss you so~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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