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liqwidnik
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since 2000-11-04
Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

0 posted 2001-03-12 06:08 PM


Sweet Softness
Light as the Wind
Entering into my soul
I see him as he glides my way
Almost as if floating on air

Each moment passes as I miss your kiss
When he holds me I tremble
From Fright?
From cold of the night?
No one knows not even this poor soul

Softly as he entered he now retreats
Only to once again return
For a peek into my soul


*Originally I started writing this for an English grade but I let what was inside of me flow and I really liked what came out I don't like following rules when writing poetry but there weren't that many for this one I hope you all enjoy it!*


Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you.

© Copyright 2001 Nicole Novak - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-03-12 06:14 PM


Lovely...James
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