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Open Poetry #12

Honey I Want You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-03-12 06:07 PM

Honey I Want You

Once my dreams were sad and few.
Then you became my favorite dream
and honey how I wanted you.
Of course I desired my dream to stay
but somehow my dreams have slipped away.

Yes I will ask her to come back to me.
Let me once again reveal the
desires from within my heart.
And it will indeed be love she see's.

No I will not chase her.
Why should I chase the wind.
The wind will come to me
and reveal things meant to be.

There's absolutely nothing you can do
to make love come to you.
You know this much is true.

Jameslee@March12,2001
JagiyaNaSarangHa

liqwidnik
Junior Member

since 2000-11-04

Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

1 posted 2001-03-12 06:18 PM

this was excellent. I know how you must feel it seems like the way I used to feel.

lovely....Nikki

Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you.

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

2 posted 2001-03-12 07:33 PM

I do believe that sadly says it all. Nice job on this. Painful, sad, but true.

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-03-12 07:41 PM

unfortunately yes, James. . . I do know this. . . but that doesn't stop me from trying!!

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-12 08:49 PM

James~ wonderfully said.....

SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-03-12 08:53 PM

Well expressed!

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