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Brand New Me |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
With you I am brand new again With you I feel fresh again With you, Not only when darkness falls But with you, At the end of it all Together it seems just right What could extinguish such a light, As you and I? Together even one time, You and I, Forever in my mind We could go on again as two Something I’d rather not do We are more Than the sum of equal parts We are more, Than broken, beating hearts Lucky is me now that I am found Lucky is me, finally unbound Who could ever Denounce such a thing as this? Who would never, Fall from the very first kiss? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you! One by one, I'll get them all back...lol... But this one was almost memorized.  |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
beautiful! *grins at Serenity!* After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks "Just a Woman". *S* Serenity, thank you and I'll do what I can. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi PoeticKnight, This was lovely such wonderful feelings given when you read it thank you, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very sweet words here.....ahha....I've fallen from just one kiss....... Really liked this a lot  SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Not only when darkness falls But with you, At the end of it all Together it seems just right What could extinguish such a light, As you and I? Together even one time, You and I, Forever in my mind We could go on again as two Something I’d rather not do We are more Than the sum of equal parts We are more, Than broken, beating hearts ======================= Who could ever Denounce such a thing as this? Who would never, Fall from the very first kiss? ====================== ahh yes...I remember this lil gem of cadence kissed romantic inspire. "We are more Than the sum of equal parts We are more, Than broken, beating hearts" very cool verse of rhyme and poetic phrasing ... as is this one ... "Who could ever Denounce such a thing as this? Who would never, Fall from the very first kiss?" now what moth could resist a line like that last one .... (dont even get me started) *L* another fave PK.. well done poet sir Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, listen isn't it great to feel "brand new" believe me it's a wonderful feeling inside. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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