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Katherine Chandler
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0 posted 2001-03-12 10:55 AM


Touch Me


Touch me.
Feel my heart race.
Let your hands dance
Over soft flesh.
Feel your way to
Tender
Moments.

Feed my soul.
Give me nourishment.
Hold me tenderly.
See my goodness.
Touch my thoughts.
See eyes smiling.
Discover me.

Taste me.
Reach inside,
See the beauty.
Feel the fire.
Surround me
With passion,
Understanding
And you..









Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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1 posted 2001-03-12 11:03 AM


I can certainly understand why the right person would want to reach out and touch...

well done!

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2 posted 2001-03-12 10:36 PM


WOW! This one was awesome Kate...and trust me if you think like that as well as pen it, the right one will come. Fantastic writing.

~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-03-12 10:41 PM


Kate,

Fabulous and very romantic. So soft I felt like I was floating while I read it!! Great work!!

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

thecraig
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4 posted 2001-03-14 01:41 AM


Made my ears tingle.
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5 posted 2001-03-14 10:17 AM


Mine too. *goes to get a q-tip*

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort


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