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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-03-12 08:36 AM

before I was dust

when I was but

a gleam

in my Father’s eyes

before my DNA

had a name

He knew me

© March 10, 2001

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-12 09:37 AM

yes, he did........vey nice VAS

SEA

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

2 posted 2001-03-12 09:57 AM

Very interesting, few words that said it all. Very good subject.

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-03-12 09:59 AM

So true...clever idea for a thought provoking poem !!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2001-03-13 09:17 AM

Hi VAS,

The one thing we can all fall back on when things are out of reach is this one fact, I loved the powerful impack this gives,

Love, Cerentiy

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-03-13 09:25 AM

VAS,
Interesting and I enjoyed reading this.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-03-13 11:41 AM

VAS,I liked it

Panne
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 15
South TX, USA

7 posted 2001-03-13 03:12 PM

VAS,
Great piece. I thoroughly enjoyed the read - short, concise, and powerfully to the point.
Panne

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

8 posted 2001-03-13 04:05 PM

Powerfully simple and true! This is something that I could see on an inspirational picture, book mark or the like...I think it would be perfect.

Jellybean King

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

9 posted 2001-03-16 04:02 PM

Wow, powerful indeed! Wonderful.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-03-16 04:43 PM

Liking this...

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2001-03-16 05:50 PM

True,true,true. Lovely expressed!

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