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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-03-11 11:07 PM

And so there are tears for a winter lost,
Springtime welcomed in fashion of warmth,
But she will miss those cuddles,
Under the blanket of chills.
Underneath broken signs and racing entrapments,
She glides with determination,
Feasting on her foes with will,
And the need to be the one who always knows.
There are tears for forever moments,
Lost within the years of getting comfortable,
And getting lazily contented to accept the unnacceptable.
Dangerously lips pass over hers,
And she kisses yet another thought,
Of roaming into the safe distance,
Without ever looking back into any eyes,
That implore her sense of duty and grace.
A thorough lady
A finished young girl,
Outwardly pulling it together,
But inwardly loosing all she ever thought she was.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-03-11 11:33 PM

and she cries and cries and cries...I am a MARATHON crier--and? I walk and cry so the neighbors KNOW I'm nuts...sigh

this was touching and I could SO relate...thank you.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-03-12 12:25 PM

Temptress~
Such tender thoughts -

'There are tears for forever moments'
And I've shed more than a few.

'And she kisses yet another thought'
One too many or far too few.

Wonderfully done, poet.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-03-12 01:20 PM

these are tears that should never be shed. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-03-12 01:38 PM

what lines:

"A thorough lady
A finished young girl, "

wow and double wow, these lines I love them......they stay with me, they are so so.....so schooled!!!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-03-12 02:29 PM

This is a truly a reaching write it's so full of human depth.....amazing !

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-03-12 09:12 PM

Temptress - you have truly written a gem. I'm glad that I stopped to read this.

BC

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

7 posted 2001-03-15 12:05 PM

Temptress, Fantastic.
She cries..also I cry at times.
Red

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