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Imaginations kind
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Imaginations kind is where she floats sings in perfect stanza's thrilling notes, swift in eye & movement quickest prance. Peripheral beings within her aura life's spirit does enhance; Two listening ears catch onto every sound, creating harmony brings senses found. Birds & insects scurrying animals on the ground, feel her presence when she is near , joy abounds; She seems to rule the places she surveys catches heart & mind she does amaze. Her face is older than the ocean depths & smoother than a child's, tolerance taller than the trees, temper , soft & mild; Without guilt she stands true, decision pure on course to do; She's a real live Fairy Princess her word is fairy law. She wings the sky through clouds & rain, across rainbows she does soar. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wonderful imagery and rhyme cadence in this lovely piece of work. Welcome to Passions ... so nice to have you here with us take care jm  We're living in a world full of illusion Everything is so unreal My mind is in a state of confusion But I can't deny the way I feel ~Depeche Mode~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
thecraig, not sure what you really mean by this poem, but to me it is beautiful and paints so many different pictures. "She" can be many things and many people. I love it and thank you. ME |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hark I bring good news! I liked your poem! Also welcome! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
She sounds exquisite. A wonderful tribute. Enjoy your writing style!  After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
thank you for writing me this poem...  ....hehe..... seriously, though, i loved it...... you DID write it for ME, didn't you? *grin |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wonderful Welcome to Passions! A great entrance...check your E-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hi Welcome! What an entrance on the gossamer wings of the Queen of the Fae, my favorite topic! Very nicely done, will look for more of your work. I do believe you posted on mine before you posted yours, so thank you also again! ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ |
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