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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-03-11 02:12 AM


~*hidden feelings*~

though our eyes have never met
your eyes of brown...my eyes of blue
a multitude of feelings stir within my heart
there are so many things i want to say to you

many things seperate us, more than just physical
mountains tall and oceans wide--
though we desperately try not to convey how we feel
there are just some things you can not hide

i hear the smile in your voice
when the two of us speak
the sheer sound of your voice
leaves me feeling completely weak--

i feel myself pull back
telling myself this simply can not be
the reasons are quite simple
you don't belong to me

i have no rights to you
yet, i can't change how i feel
i dont quite have a word for what this is
but these feelings are pure and real

we have both been hurt from our pasts
hurt so deep, that it broke our hearts in two
so...we build these walls
now neither of us knows what to do

someday i may find myself
look deep within your eyes
the mere thought of that
leaves me with a contented sigh


Amy M. Kennedy




"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."



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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-03-11 05:51 AM


I know not what to say except for, this is beautiful.

hugs

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-03-11 09:42 AM


though our eyes have never met
your eyes of brown...my eyes of blue
a multitude of feelings stir within my heart
there are so many things i wish i could say to you
===============

me thinks ya just said it all ...
and ya did it sweetly, sincerely and poetically perfect.
beautiful writing Amy-girl
love ya
jan

We're living in a world full of illusion
Everything is so unreal
My mind is in a state of confusion
But I can't deny the way I feel
~Depeche Mode~

suthern
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3 posted 2001-03-12 02:26 PM


Well I THOUGHT my thoughts were hidden... but you've described my feelings so well I must have hired a sky-writer! LOL Beautiful, Aimster... I like this very much!

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