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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Adrift upon a distant cloud, beyond the Milky Way, destinations yet unknown, no quest, my night's foray, swallowed by the evening's still, I ponder destiny, carried by a breathless wind, beyond eternity. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
A beautiful flow to this. I admire this writing so much. Leaves the reader pondering life. Nicely done! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What magical thoughts. I like this. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Mike..you write so many beautiful visions with so few words...a poet with so much talent...thank you for sharing it so very well and allowing us to read what you weave...it is turly an honor~ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow such powerful writings in just a small verse, now that takes talent  Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
seems seasonal to ponder change...and look forward... library.... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, such a beautifull little poem...brilliant writing and good morning to you! Nathan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
My ponderings were heading in the same direction (without direction) Very lovely as always A joy to read Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--Nobody muses quite like you do...this is magical! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
If you ever publish the Musings of Mike (and I think it would be a hit!) I want a copy. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Mike~ How truly beautifully this flows. Thanks for taking me along ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Pleasant read I enjoyed. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Another drifter heard from . . . I know that cloud. |
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