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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
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Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-03-10 10:32 PM


The words will not mesh
the stars hide
there is something
more than but in words

it is said "The coward dies
a thousand tiimes" what of
believers the projectors
tomorrows what happens to them

immersion is also suffocation
is there no end to this
world of hurt there and more
people without never know lifes knowledge

the two edged sword
impaling is a terrible must
when you hear without the wind
you walk a trial of dust to dust

"When all hope has left you, and there is no reason to breathe, you die within the crucifixtion, of your very own dream."


"Beginning is one place, I've been before." J. Anderson

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-03-10 10:45 PM


"when you hear without the wind...

how lonely a thought

especially when I know I rely on it for company....

Sir...thank you for this....


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 03-10-2001).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2001-03-11 01:17 AM


You keep closing in on me with meaning...exceptional...loved the crucifixtion imagery...truly, truly, thought to feed..
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