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emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

0 posted 2001-03-10 08:13 PM

I'll save the notes for a symphony
if you just give me your song
be part of my reality
until I am finally strong.

I love you without question
beneath the bluest of sky
be a friend, or be my confessor,
only stay with me until I die.

You will never know
what your words have meant to me
from the strength that your've endowed.
I release the pain, I feel free.

Thank you for trusting in time
and for words that comfort and heal
thank you for saving me, once
when I had ceased to feel.

I love you in the purest sincerity
and I'm not ashamed to say
I've seen past the walls in clarity
from the vision you portray.

I love you.

Emily

[This message has been edited by emily (edited 03-10-2001).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-03-10 08:27 PM

it's wonderful when you can finally see it, isn't it??

wonderful poem. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-03-10 08:42 PM

love you in the purest sincerity
and I'm not ashamed to say
I've seen past the walls in clarity
from the vision you've protrayed.

I love you.

Isn't it the best feeling?

beautiful!

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-10-2001).]

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2001-03-10 08:49 PM

So true!
The wonder in love
when you finally
see things for what they are..
Well done!

~*Peachy Be*~

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

4 posted 2001-03-10 09:35 PM

Not a word mispoken within

Your tribute is moving. My thanks

AT

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-03-10 09:48 PM

Well done....enjoyed!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-03-10 10:03 PM

Truly lovely thoughts here Emily

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-03-10 11:33 PM

Lovely work, emily. Even the steepest walls can be brought down. Just have to believe in yourself. I think you truly do. Very sincere and honest writing.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

8 posted 2001-03-10 11:42 PM

Beautiful and heartfelt. This was wonderful.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2001-03-11 04:49 PM

And a nice thank you this is, for the kind of friendship we all would like to be blessed with.

emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

10 posted 2001-03-13 10:14 AM

thank you all very much!

Emily

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