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LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

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0 posted 2001-03-10 06:20 PM

Your Touch

One touch and I was gone
You had broken through all my walls,
My barriers and defenses that kept my heart from knowing joy.
With that touch you changed my life and all that I would become.

That which I worked so hard to build suddenly came crashing down

I was a dead man among the living knowing neither love nor hate.
I as I walked my path in loneliness I thought I new my fate.
But you changed all that with one touch of your hand.

As people sought to change what I was I put up a front
I would turn on those who came to close

I never knew what life was like, I never even cared.
But then you came along and your touch you shared.
The chains about my soul were shattered

I can now walk among the living
Now I may begin to live, to love, to feel again
All because of that one touch

Denise

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1 posted 2001-03-10 06:42 PM

Welcome to Passions LoneWolf! Lovely poem! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

essenceofangels
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since 2000-07-12

Posts 36

2 posted 2001-03-10 07:07 PM

Welcome to pip LoneWolf!!! I love the poem keep up the good work!

"Look back on life with kindly eyes"

"A word is dead When it is said,
Some say.I say it just Begins to live That day."

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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3 posted 2001-03-10 07:52 PM

This is quite moving, welcome to the forum!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

4 posted 2001-03-12 10:19 AM

Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more of your work! *S*

Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

5 posted 2001-03-12 10:28 AM

Awesome poem Lone Wolf. Welcome to Passions, I hope to read more of your poetry. I've totally enjoyed all of them so far.

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2001-03-13 09:05 AM

Hi LoneWolf,

This is wonderful and welcome to Passions hope you injoy your stay,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

7 posted 2001-03-13 09:34 AM

welcome......and yes, nice work

enjoyed

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-03-13 10:00 AM

Welcome to Passions!

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

9 posted 2001-03-13 11:50 AM

Welcome! I liked this very much

SEA

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20

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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

10 posted 2001-03-13 02:24 PM

Welcome Lone Wolf! Isn't it strange how one word, one look, one something can change our outlook on life? Wonderful writing and thank you for sharing it with us.
ME

Jellybean King
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

11 posted 2001-03-13 03:19 PM

This poem captures the essence of it...the power of one touch to a special someone given at the right time can move mountains...and bring the dead back to life (emotionally and spriritually speaking...that is). Thank you for sharing!

Jellybean King

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