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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Rest Stop Virginia Salter gentle, cooling breeze swirls places peace at each side world’s hum surrounds yet touches not, beyond the hearing crow’s shadow greets me draws my eye upward pulls it toward snow-flecked peaks yet no call to come only “take in our awesomeness against soft cerulean sky” sharp, jagged aretes made smooth to the heart by the moment soothing weariness of soul © July 11, 2000 |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~*Sigh*~ I felt very relaxed after reading this piece Virginia. Few words painted an entire scene....... Makes me want to go for a drive! Well Done!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
this is well written, loved the images Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, irie! And today, here, would be a lovely day for a drive. the sky is a pale morning powder blue with bits of feathery clouds and a rising amber glow above the budding trees and crow flies. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading/commenting! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Moon Dust! How'd you do that? You got your comment in in between the first one and my reply. Glad you enjoyed! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful images, almost makes me want write about the view I see from my window...hmm...think I will go and do just that, you inspired me - thank you. ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ |
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