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JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


0 posted 03-10-2001 05:14 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Baby

Baby I love you
oh yeah.
Baby I love you
uh huh.
More than I can say.
Baby I love you
but you're so far away
oh yeah.
And baby I love you
uh huh.
More than my heart can bear.
And baby I miss you
because you are never there.
Baby where did we go wrong?
I miss calling you baby all night long.
I am not faking.
My heat is aching for only you.
My heart is breaking right in two
and I don't know what to do
cause baby I'm missing no one else but you.
Baby I love you
and now I'm missin your kissin.
Please tell me what to do.
Is it really true we're thru?
Has my love lost you?
Baby I love you.

Jameslee@March10,2001
BabyisMichelle
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Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


1 posted 03-10-2001 07:11 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

SBJ is singing the blues ...
you've written a bittersweet and melodic
tune here James.
well done poet sir
take care
jm

Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~
Paula Finn
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since 06-17-2000
Posts 5525
missouri


2 posted 03-10-2001 01:37 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Sing it sweet poet...I know where you are coming from...but we both know its gonna get better...LOVE YA!!!
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 03-10-2001 03:24 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Janet and Paula...she called me baby, baby all night long...you mean being alone gets better...I know, I know...let go...James
KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 12-04-2000
Posts 583
Waikiki, Hawaii


4 posted 03-10-2001 10:47 PM       View Profile for KokoStewartKoomoa   Email KokoStewartKoomoa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KokoStewartKoomoa's Home Page   View IP for KokoStewartKoomoa

Aloha and hugs James. Yes it will get better. You won't be alone forever sweet man!
Spring is coming new things come with it.
Thanks for commenting on my poems. I have not made it post as much, but i smile when i see your aloha left there.
Take care and God bless you!


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


5 posted 03-10-2001 11:17 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

A well-written piece and nicely expressed James.

Nathan
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


6 posted 02-23-2003 12:17 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

It did get better...we spend a little time together and its nice to see old friends...James
 
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