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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Baby Baby I love you oh yeah. Baby I love you uh huh. More than I can say. Baby I love you but you're so far away oh yeah. And baby I love you uh huh. More than my heart can bear. And baby I miss you because you are never there. Baby where did we go wrong? I miss calling you baby all night long. I am not faking. My heat is aching for only you. My heart is breaking right in two and I don't know what to do cause baby I'm missing no one else but you. Baby I love you and now I'm missin your kissin. Please tell me what to do. Is it really true we're thru? Has my love lost you? Baby I love you. Jameslee@March10,2001 BabyisMichelle |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SBJ is singing the blues ... you've written a bittersweet and melodic tune here James. well done poet sir take care jm Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sing it sweet poet...I know where you are coming from...but we both know its gonna get better...LOVE YA!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Janet and Paula...she called me baby, baby all night long...you mean being alone gets better...I know, I know...let go...James |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Aloha and hugs James. Yes it will get better. You won't be alone forever sweet man! Spring is coming new things come with it. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I have not made it post as much, but i smile when i see your aloha left there. Take care and God bless you! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A well-written piece and nicely expressed James. Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It did get better...we spend a little time together and its nice to see old friends...James |
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