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Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-10 12:57 PM



This Morning's Sun Is For You.

As the shadow of the night dims
And the sounds of the owls tire
Wake up to the new day's dawn
As the sun so bright entices a yawn

Take the time to reflect on a new day
Smile, breath in, listen to the birds sing
Let the pillow fights go on, the kids at play
Switch your mind into the new beginning

Time is the essence of your freedom
Catch the moment you now have, throw away any gloom
Wrap yourself with nature's gift, the sun
Let it warm you up with its awesome energy
Encircling, enticing, and challenging your body
Scream out loud, "thank you heaven, for the sun"
Before dusk brings the darkness of the night


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2001-03-10 01:19 AM


Oh Daniel I am so ready for the warmth of the sun on my face...this is lovely
FrankBH
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since 2001-03-08
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Florida
2 posted 2001-03-10 02:52 AM


Thanks for letting me wake up to these friendly reminders of a great day ahead. Really enjoyed this.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-03-10 05:54 AM


Yes, the sun is a gift and so are friends, and so are you, my friend.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-03-10 05:58 AM


You knew I'd peek in



just to say
thanks for this!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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Michigan
5 posted 2001-03-10 08:11 AM


Daniel, This speaks softly as whispers in the morning...beautiful writing..gentle and tender and a warm breeze~
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-03-10 09:50 AM


Daniel the imagery and message in this is
wonderfully conveyed
well done poet sir ...
nice to see your name here again as well
take care
jm

Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

Moon Dust
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7 posted 2001-03-10 09:54 AM


I was feeling a little sad, but this picked me up. thanks for sharing

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
8 posted 2001-03-10 10:03 AM


Awsome poem!
Awesome message!

~*Patiently waiting for the sun to come up*~

Much Enjoyed Daniel


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Charisma
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lost in blue pages
9 posted 2001-03-10 04:04 PM


oh Daniel, what a wonderful warm poem, and it makes me desire for some sun warmth on my face.

love it.

Charisma

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-03-10 04:06 PM


JD~
Wonderfully written.
May the warmth of the sun caress you in gentle rays.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2001-03-10 04:09 PM


This reminds me of a poem I wrote that I will post sometime soon...James
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
12 posted 2001-03-10 11:58 PM


Wonderful advice, wonderful write!

Nathan

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
13 posted 2001-03-11 12:05 PM


Paula, Frank, Kathleen, Sunshine, Butterflies, Janet, MoodDust, Irie, Charisma, Marge, James, and Nate,
Sorry for the delay in replying, your comments are very much appreciated. Love you all.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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