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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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By Invitation Only ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Upon whose summoning didst thou cometh across this moat of fallen tears rapping upon an empty heart ? An invitation for your presence to whisper across my night in ribbons of desire ... was not issued from this heart Please be gone ... for my thoughts remain with another three heartaches ago There is no celebration here ... ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Painful...but true....hearts should be 'invitation only'....well done Marge. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ouch..... your words have bitten the queen of angst...lol....(someone called me that once... jm? don't remember)... geesh anyway... whatever... it's a strong piece with a biting edge clearly spoken from the voice of a poet who means what she says.... nice work..... i am bitten |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Thank you ... love knowing you're out there.  Doreen (Alias 'Queenie')~ Tee-Hee ! Chomp !  Love your response ... like ? ... Nah ..LOVE it !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
OUCH!!!stoppppp thattttttt!!!  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Marge! Great writing! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Marge---I love it when you speak truth with a bite...This is great! Hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
An invitation for your presence to whisper across my night in ribbons of desire ... was not issued from this heart Please be gone ... for my thoughts remain with another three heartaches ago ===================== BUT I was only stopping by to sell girl scout cookies!!!..HONEST  LOLVery cool poem my Shakespearian tongued(penned) poet ... love the vocab and style of this bittersweet piece well done and clever writing Margie-girl Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
came in to get my invite punched...but as always, you throw one heck of a curve.... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
wham! - even your slaps are beautifully written |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL Doreen~ What ARE those things doing ????? Denise~ I had not the slightest clue what this muse would have me do .. I only know she was intent on seeing that this verse was sent. Martie~ There was a sorrow this little muse brought, of a heart not open to another assault. I know not where she came from or even where she went ... but in refusing the invitation perhaps she had her vent. JanetMarie~ Can you use 'bittersweet' and Girl Scout Cookies in the same breath ??? LOL@ you ! Come back - I'm out ! Karilea~ The curves of the heart are many - but Girl Scout Cookies ... I haven't any ! Ask JanetMarie to stop by again ! Wilfred~ Sadly this muse seems to have left a palm print burned upon the heart of would-be-lovers she has spurned. *Thanks to all of you for your gracious replies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Opps...wrong door! Oh but this was well penned. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, Excuse me please may I come in? Just making sure you know I Love this dear heart. Because I surely do. Fabulously written, but then it wouldn't be anything other than perfection coming from you dear heart. So miss, since I'm stealing time, (now does the theft of time that stole me from you in the first place, make it fair? Oh whatever, I'm here!) Anyway since I'm now stealing back some time I had to say I love this. And can I come in, pleaseeeeeeeee. I just know someone is going to find out that I'm committing theft, and I shall be executed at dawn. And if I'm going to suffer anyway I want to spend it with those I love. Love and warm stuff Puck Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ LOL @ 'wrong door' ... Glad you knocked. MARSHA ~ Now this is cause for a smile. Should they put you in chains for thievery I shall break down the doors and rescue you. You are a wonderful sight for these eyes ! I love ya', gal ! Miss you broadly ! If you 'swing' at sun up ... I shall be there with a band of merry poets to spring you free ! *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
ok... you go girl! Your muse never sleeps! Deb |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
ouch is right... Sadly true.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Marge, if it's not working for you right from the heart then send them away! I love the outspoken writing here and the truth and honesty are working big time...good write!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yikers....true, and honest....spoken wonderfully...be well Marge... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah Margie girl...this is sadder than sad |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This one actually jumped up and whispered to me on my drive to work Friday morning. Not sure yet where it came from ... VoiceLess~ Thank you for the read. ETHome~ Heck, I'm not even sure where it came from - but I'll remember it if I ever need it. GreenEyes~ I am quite well, my friend. Thank you. Paula~ It is rather, isn't it ? Thanks for the read, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
YIKES - Remind me never to mess with Marge unless I'm invited... You say it like it is, my friend... quite poetically, I might add..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Check your invitation - It was issued with a No-Expiration date ! Thanks for the read, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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