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walker
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0 posted 2001-03-09 04:46 PM



Amusing,
I must have been to you.
Your desires,
broke me out of my shell.
Completely,
I surrendered.
Leaving myself,
at your mercy.
Silly picture,
I must have been,
feeding you,
my love forever.
You were selfish,
I was dumb.
In my innocence,
I thought,
that I would always
love you,
I was wrong.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-03-09 07:00 PM


Wow...very sad......I'm sorry it didn't work out..or maybe not...if it's for the best.
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2 posted 2001-03-09 07:24 PM


I'm thinking it's fantastic to be wrong in this case.....I've been this wrong before too....it hurts, but we learn.....excellent writing! SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

Celeste
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3 posted 2001-03-09 07:32 PM


Ouch. That's a painful feeling. You have such an openness to your writing. I really enjoy that.

To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday.

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4 posted 2001-03-09 07:36 PM


Hurtful, but like it tho.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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