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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
eThoughts fly round Memories flutter Pictures flash up Sadness rises Tears fall down Shattered torment Feelings come back Warm skin Sweaty chested Leather saddles Shows won Dissapointments shared Feelings of elation Overcoming fears Shattered devotions Sickness and health Soreness and limps Bumps and bruises Tossed up dreams And the ripping Grinding sensation Horse falling Girl calling Tears falling Backhoe digging Goodbye coming Hole dug Body covered Hurt uncovered Grief just beginning --------------------------------------------------- This is dedicated to a wonderful friend and riding companion- Goodbye Sugar Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, I could feel a rodeo. Did you lose your friend from a rodeo accident? I also noticed you are from WallaWalla. We're mighty close neighbors. Always exciting to learn of more poets in the area. Sorry for your loss. A fine tribute. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, Cuddlez...good to see ya, but I truly am sorry to hear about your loss. But, always remember you have your friends at Passions when you need us. Very heartfelt write, m'friend... sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Hey all- Actually this horse was one of a kind. She taught me how to ride and was a shoulder whenever I needed it. A definite first love:-! She actually died when she was 18 no one could figure out what from. Probably the result of a hard life and carrying/caring for many people who who didn't care back. Boy this is making me sad. Cuddlez Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
so sad, nice tho Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I compliment your writing and offer a hug. Painful emotion.  To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
 Good bye is a hard thing to say.It's devastating to lose an animal we love so much. Well written! |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Yah I know goodbye is hard to say. Wish I was at least sort of expecting it, ya know? Thanks for replying to my message. Shell shocked pretty much describes me right now... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
WEll, I certainly misunderstood this one. I thought the 'riding companion' was human. I'm glad it was not...but still deeply sorry for your loss of a wonderful friend. |
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