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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Moonlight Moonlight creeps in Casts shadows Where tiny creatures Stepped through the snow Moonlight Turns beautiful The sculptures Left by shovels Moonlight Enhances All it touches Your eyes Your smile Your love The first duty of love is to listen. ~ Paul Tillich ~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and tonight.......under a full moon....the dance will begin.....  love this WY SEAIf I let you into my heart..... will you promise to stay? ~Sue~ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Ahhhhhhhh, *soft sigh*, that is love! To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You must be lookin' at that same full moon through clear skies that I've been seein'. Thank the Lord, we've no snow here though. Mornings look a little frosty though.  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* wonderful......just wonderful. enjoyed it very much my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to dance through this was a delight....well done, Mr. Yeats! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Yes, moon glow changes the way things look, but I think that it is your eyes that have made them beautiful. I love the simple pleasure of this poem! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
beauiful Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This couldn't have fit better with the full moon we have tonight! It's just perfect. I love it!! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: Oh definitely it does... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Wilfred, your poem brings to life rich images and thoughts, both visually and viscerally. Thank you for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"Moonlight turns beautiful the sculptures left by shovels" Wilfred, your poem is stunning and the imagery is breathtaking... This has to be one of my top favorites you've penned and ya know how much I adore the snow, and moon oh my goodness ya have me smiling from ear to ear the entire poem just flowed so gracefully... It was sweet to come across this read PoetFriend... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your eyes... Your smile... Your Love... Ohhh sir poet Bill...you are the king of romance and THAT is written all over this lovely piece of star kissed poetry...beautiful writing~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
beautiful |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Golly - I must have done something right - Thank you all - thank you very much - now I must strive to do better |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful piece....thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
elegant words, Bill...sometimes the simplest of thoughts is the most beautiful..I should take some lessons from you *s...huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Moonlight becomes you....lovely Bill...Always... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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