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Open Poetry #12

Evening's Begun

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-03-09 11:04 AM

Evening’s Begun
Virginia Salter

Summer, sweet summer
sailing azure waters
‘cross iridescent waves
‘neath powder-blue sky

schooners, clippers crisscross
to the breezes, list, fly, settle at peace
in-tandem two sail southward
trio heads north

methodically Puget Sound fills
sunset worshipers gather
in anticipation

© July 10, 2000

I tried for all I was worth to post a photo on with this and was unsuccessful. What's the procedure?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-03-09 12:32 PM

lovely imagery as always with your work Virginia ..
email me your pic properties and how you were trying to post code wise and I'll try to help

Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

2 posted 2001-03-09 12:35 PM

Was wonderful even without the picture...Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-03-09 12:42 PM

I like this very much and the evening mood you've captured with it. Nicely done.

Poeminister

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

4 posted 2001-03-09 01:24 PM

Beautiful! I loved it.

To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday.

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